Sinners Road Chapter 1: page 1

First, let me say that you'll have the honor of getting the first critique I've ever written on DA :]

Since I noticed your artwork and starting watching you, you've improved so much. Your style has this distinct and unique look that if I were to see something you posted while randomly browsing DA, I would immediately recognize it.

You've mastered drawing on the computer WAY faster than I ever will (and I've been trying for like...ten years now? LOL I'm just not a digital artist at all...someday, I'll be half as good as you are <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> )

You're very good at showing the character's emotions which is something I still struggle with, to this day. And I really like how you draw your character's faces.

I looks forward to the future pages of Sinner's Road. Just take your time, work on your skills (no matter how good you get, there's always ways to get better - my instructor in school been life drawing all his life and still find new ways to get better).

I better see you selling stuff in comic conventions in the future if you do decide to go professional >[ Because you're artwork is that good! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>

Hope this is good enough for my first critique!! xD